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[Hinawas Death Animatic (Draft 1)]

so like hinawa burned to death? because if we are turning this in for a assignment i think it should be able to read without context unless theres more of this animatic you didnt show.

MarcyMP3 responds:

I was short on time, but I did add some context on my second pass. I probably should've shown the production boards with the dialog

[LINEFORMATION]

is this loss

MishaMike responds:

Y e s.

[basically antoons]

love it

Genesiz responds:

Lol thanks

[Kiki's Fashion Show]

very cute, though at the end where kiki poke her head through the green screen, it kinda makes it seem like it was snowflakes green screen? despite the video being mostly kikis idea?? which would be a funny joke if that fact was made more obvious. besides that, a solid youtube parody

PascalSchmidlin responds:

Oh yeah, you're right! Oops

[Some chibi fight I made in Blender]

decent choreography i guess is what they say, shot planning?? anyways its alright but the action could definitely be lot more punchier, maybe look up spacing charts for your keyframes. and also have the jumping around move along arcs, i suggest using the grease pencil to plans those out in the camera view

CutseyWaffle responds:

Wow that's a great idea! I must admit it doesn't flow very well. But yeah definetly looking up some keyframes and some more spacing. The grease pencil idea is really brilliant. Oh moving arcs could do very well have them use more of the enviroment.

[Looks Like Kermit?]

actually just kermit. also would appreciate numbering these if theres a consistent story going on

Kelsland responds:

I'll number these from now on, but this isn't kermit, it's a character from muppet's most wanted constantine.

https://muppet.fandom.com/wiki/Constantine